Hello welcome back to my blog over the past few weeks my class has been doing SEXXXY Paragraphs.
SEXXXY means (S statment E example eXmple eXmple eXmple Y your opinion)
For this task we watched hunt for the wilder people. SEXXXY Paragraphs have helped me work better because it helps me write better. My favourite part of the film study has been the movie.
Here are some slides of what I`ve been doing.
Hope you liked the slides
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Hi Ethan
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your slides to your blog. Looking at your final paragraph, I think it would be improved if you took another look at the SEXXXY template. You've highlighted the areas you have identified as matching each indicator, however, each should be at least 1 sentence long.
I would recommend you take some time to edit this, adding in more clear examples with evidence from the film in order to correctly show that you can write a SEXXXY paragraph.
- Miss Birtch