I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hey Ethan this is Chelsea I like how you have put description in this. Next time can you put a introduction in and but more whiting in. blog you later.
Hey Ethan This is very good. but next time can you write an intro. Did you make the bug man up? Maybe you could explain what the bugman looks like? Blog you later.
Malo e le lei Ethan. Its Emalea here. I think you need to update, you haven't in a while. Maybe you need a picture of what you think the bug man looks like? What does W.A.L.T mean? Maybe add an introduction. Also good job. Bye blog you later!
Hi my name is Morgan I liked how your learning about smiles I liked how you explained about the bug man but next time read it before you post it because it doesn't make sense
Kia ora Ethan, my name is Rymon and I am a year six. I really like your writing about your bug man. You said some right but some never made sense but you still gave it a hundred persent of work keep it up.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
your the blgger of the week well guess whos comenting #lucas
ReplyDeleteHi ethan it is me Dani. I love your work add more information about bug man. I love your work bye.
ReplyDeletehey Ethan this is Chelsea
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put description in this.
Next time can you put a introduction in and but more whiting in.
blog you later.
Hey Ethan
ReplyDeleteThis is very good. but next time can you write an intro. Did you make the bug man up? Maybe you could explain what the bugman looks like?
Blog you later.
Hi Ethan
ReplyDeleteI like your work but next time you cold maybe add an intro and even add some more information
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ReplyDeleteuuuu bug man i hope i dont see a bug man i hate bug's but it's cool that your learning adout bug's
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Malo e le lei Ethan. Its Emalea here. I think you need to update, you haven't in a while. Maybe you need a picture of what you think the bug man looks like? What does W.A.L.T mean? Maybe add an introduction. Also good job. Bye blog you later!
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan I liked what you write but maybe next time you could add some pitchers or some more information about it.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Morgan I liked how your learning about smiles I liked how you explained about the bug man but next time read it before you post it because it doesn't make sense
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ReplyDeletebug man sounds cool have one question is he a hero or a Villon or both is he nice or mean.you right good stores
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Kia ora Ethan,
ReplyDeletemy name is Rymon and I am a year six. I really like your writing about your bug man. You said some right but some never made sense but you still gave it a hundred persent of work keep it up.