I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Ethan! It's great to see that you have been doing some work on your blog over the holidays! Im not sure i like the topic tho - spiders creep me out! Ive got a neigbour what calls me freaking out when she finds one in her house and i have to go and remove it for her - luckily there haven't been any in the last few weeks! Have you ever looked for the poisonous red backed spiders in the sand dunes at the beach? There are lots there apparently so be carefull! I'd love to see you try to put some of the information you found into your own words - there was lots of complex language in there - it is great if you can google words that you don't know and find other words to use instead. I look forward to reading your next post! share them with me when you are done if you can - 1sy@hornby.school.nz Mark
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Ethan! It's great to see that you have been doing some work on your blog over the holidays! Im not sure i like the topic tho - spiders creep me out! Ive got a neigbour what calls me freaking out when she finds one in her house and i have to go and remove it for her - luckily there haven't been any in the last few weeks! Have you ever looked for the poisonous red backed spiders in the sand dunes at the beach? There are lots there apparently so be carefull! I'd love to see you try to put some of the information you found into your own words - there was lots of complex language in there - it is great if you can google words that you don't know and find other words to use instead.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your next post! share them with me when you are done if you can - 1sy@hornby.school.nz
Mark