Hello guys,
Today I'm blogging about Science.
Here's what I've done.
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Draft:
Planting Seeds Without Soil
Aim: to plant seeds without soil
Hypothesis: I think the seeds will grow big and strong.
Materials: A beaker, paper towel, seeds (any type of seeds) And water.
Instructions:
Get a bekan and a paper towel.
Roll the paper towel into a circle and fit it in the bekan.
Fill the glass bekan to 50 mils and put the seeds in the sides of the glass.
Conclusion: When the seeds roots attach to the paper towel and sprout take it out and put it in soil.
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Final:
Planting Seeds Without Soil
Aim: to plant seeds without soil
Hypothesis: I think the seeds will grow big and strong.
Materials: A beaker, paper towel, seeds (any type of seeds) And water.
Instructions:
Get a beaker and a paper towel.
Roll the paper towel into a circle and fit it in the beaker
Fill the glass beaker to 50 mils and put the seeds in the sides of the glass.
Conclusion: When the seeds roots attach to the paper towel and sprout take it out and put it in soil.
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Hope you liked it.
-Ethan Fowler
Hi Ethan, great to see you are finishing off some of your classwork while you are away from school! What sort of seeds were you growing? I have kept some tomato seeds from different tomatos that i grew this year. I squeezed the seeds out onto sheets of paper towel and let them dry. I wrote what type of tomato it was beside the seeds. Next year i can just put some water on the paper towel and they will start sprouting, then i can grow them in some soil. You should try it if you have any tomatos at home!
ReplyDeleteIm going to put a few ideas on my blog of things to do at home so take a look and try some and then post them on your blog so i can see what you have done! Keep in touch.
Mark
Ethan, I am so pleased with this writing! You've already taken your draft and done your final copy PLUS posted it to your blog! You're ahead of the class as we haven't done this yet. I'm impressed you knew what your next steps needed to be and you have gone in and done that. Just be sure to check that you have included the right type of sentences in your conclusion:
ReplyDelete- very short
- Adverb start
- W start
What I like best about your writing is that you are using your own words to explain your learning. Keep thinking about that when you are sharing your other work from home activities.
Great job on this! Is there anything else from Science Hurumanu to finish up?
- Miss Birtch